Student A—Ear
learner
“For
example, I can use my ability to look at sawer system, I can see which pipe is
get old and rusy to the sawer department can fixit first before it blow up.”
The errors
tend to be more usage. The grammatical
errors that are there are based on inflection or other word-final issues.
Student B—Ear
learner
“But there’re
still a lot of problem that I have to dealing with because of my economic
change just like pople say “more money more problem.”
The passage
is fairly fluently written. There are
some sentence boundary problems. The spelling problems tend to be homophonic.
This indicates the writer is using oral language in his/her written work.
Student C—Ear
learner (possibly Gen 1.5)
Uses
idiomatic expressions with spelling errors.
Fluently written. Relatively few
errors.
Student D—Eye
Learner
This student
has pretty good spelling, and his sentence level problems tend to be grammar errors more than usage
errors.
Student E—Eye
Learner
Basic
grammatical errors (that are not usage errors).
Seem to be some transference errors, as in “for the survive.” The fact
that he identifies himself as from another country suggests that he learned
English in a classroom.
Student F—Ear
Learner
The fluent,
stream of consciousness type of writing here suggests that the student is a
proficient oral speaker.
The
Importance of Dance—Eye Learner
This one is
difficult. It is very fluently written,
and many of the errors are either inflection or word-final errors. The student shows a very sophisticated
understanding of essay structure and argumentation, which to me would indicate
previous educational experience. This
and the fact that many of the errors seem to be grammatical rather than
usage-based would indicate that the writer is an Eye Learner.
Pot Legal—Ear
Learner
The writing
is fluent. The biggest problems with
this essay are not grammatical but organizational and genre specific.
Weird Friday—Ear
Learner
The
writing is very fluent, and the errors
tend to be more usage based than grammatical.
Spelling—Ear
Leaner
Errors tend
to be more usage based than grammatical. There are some word final mistakes (rather
than errors).
Introduction
Sample 1—Ear Learner
The
writing is fairly fluent, and the errors
tend to be usage based (specifically homophonic spelling errors).
Introduction
Sample 2—Ear Learner
A lot of
errors that are homophonic spelling errors.
Some sentences are perfectly formed, and he uses some idiomatic
expressions.
Introduction
Sample 3—Ear Learner
Use of
idiomatic expressions. Fluent writer.
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