Sunday, March 17, 2013


These articles have a lot in common even though some focus on AAVE speakers and some focus on bilingual Spanish/English speakers. One clear thread running through all the papers is we, as teachers, should not expect to have speakers of “Standard English,” or a privileged variety of English, in our classrooms. When we do have speakers of other dialects or languages in our classrooms, we should not assume that they all have the same backgrounds, skill sets, or problems.

Another thread that goes through all of the articles is that they all want to debunk mistaken attitudes that composition scholars and instructors might have.
  • Don't think that all composition students speak a "previliged variety of English," even if it seems that way in the Composition literature.
  • Don’t think that written English is the same as, or even really affects spoken English
  •  Don’t think that Standard English is necessary for success in the workplace or the classroom
  •  Don’t think that learning to write academic English is just learning a new dialect. It is much more complicated and deep than that, and can entail making over one’s identity.
  • Don’t think that students who are reluctant to learn Standard English are stupid or unprepared. They might have reasons that are related to community, identity, power and oppression.
  •  Don’t think that a student who is engaged with and enthusiastic about learning academic English will do so in one semester. It is a long process and they might never speak/write it at a native level.
  •   Don’t think that all bilingual students have the same issues or skills.
  •  Don’t think that bilingual English learners have the same issues as those who are bilingual and speak English fluently.

Synthesizing Matsuda and Valdés


Valdés seems to have introduced these ideas to the composition community, and then Matsuda extended that discussion and focused on one aspect of what Valdés  introduced.  Specifically, Valdés made the point that there is not just one kind of bilingual student, and that each kind probably has different needs. Matsuda discusses one of the reasons bilingual students had not been focused on in the literature: there exists a myth of linguistic homogeneity, where compositionists assumed that their students are monolingual speakers of “standard” English. Because the scholars conceived of students in that way, they unintentionally left out students who spoke other languages or dialects. Similarly, assessment tests excluded non-native speakers from “regular” composition classes, relegating those students to basic skills courses or ESL courses.

As teachers, it would be useful to remember that, according to Valdés, functional bilingual students tend to make idiomatic errors, as well as the same kinds of errors that basic skills student might make.  If we can keep this in mind when reading student papers, we might have a better idea of how to help the students who make this kind of error.

Valdés raises so many question, discusses so many directions that we should go as researchers, that it would be impossible to list them all here. Well, not impossible, but it would take a lot of space. I think one clear take away point from both authors is the idea that we as instructors should not make assumptions about our students. We should not assume that they are all SE speakers. We should not assume that all bilingual speakers are the same, have the same problems, or should be dealt with in the same way in the classroom. 

Matsuda and Valdés


Matsuda
The Myth of Linguistic Homogeneity in US College Composition

This is a theoretical/historical piece that argues that despite the known demographics of the United States, composition instructors expect that their students will be speakers of a privileged variety of English. As an example, most composition studies assume that the students are all monolingual English speakers. Some important ideas introduced in this paper:

·         Myth of linguistic homogeneity: the tacit and widespread acceptance of the dominant image of comp students as native speakers of a privileged variety of English
·         Linguistic containment: quarantining from higher education students who have not mastered this privileged variety of English
·         Long term implication of linguistic containment: perpetuation of the myth of linguistic homogeneity, as those students are not allowed in the classroom

Example: proficiency tests for composition placement; even if direct assessment of writing is used for placement, raters giving disproportionate weight to language differences. These placement practices reify the myth by making it seem as if language differences can be effectively removed from the comp classroom.

“Teachers overwhelmed by the presence of language differences tell students to “proofread more carefully” or “go to the writing center”; those who are not native speakers of dominant varieties of English are being held accountable for what is not being taught.” (640)

I have seen this happen even at SFSU!



Valdés
Bilingual Minorities and Language Issues in Writing

This is a theoretical piece that criticizes the composition field for not being sensitive to the needs of bilingual students, and especially for conflating all the different kinds of bilingual students into one category. Actually, there are at least 4 kinds of bilinguals, as defined by Valdés:

Incipient: ESL learners / Functional: can function in L2
Elective: learn an L2 for fun / Circumstantial: learn an L2 to live; they must learn it, for school or work

This study discusses all of them, but focuses on functional circumstantial bilinguals.

Adult functional learners may become native-like in several areas, especially verbally, but they will have some “learner like” abilities, or may have learned an “imperfect” variety of English in their home community.

Functional bilinguals may be put into ESL courses with the incipient learners, but this will likely not help, as functional bilinguals errors are probably fossilized. Also, they usually make idiomatic errors (preposition, word form errors in idioms)and have a  “non-phonological accent.”

“Bilinguals who are native-like in their fluency may be most unnative-like in their selection and in their use of conventionalized language. Problems of selection or idiomaticity are particularly salient in written language.” Otherwise, their language will be almost native-like. At the same time, they will probably make the same errors that native speaker basic skills students would make.

Learning how to write in a second language may involve much more than simply learning how to avoid interference from the first language

Writing of minority bilinguals should be studied independently of the writing of mainstream individuals

The author goes on to suggest areas where more study is needed, such as if there is such a thing as an expert bilingual writer, and if there is, how does s/he write? Is there  a certain length of exposure to a written language necessary (L1 or L2) before benefits are reflected in a student’s writing? How do bilinguals revise? What is the sequence in which their skills develop? What is the influence of background factors on their writing? Etc.  

Saturday, March 9, 2013

Synthesis: "Standard" English?


“Critical Thoughts on Teaching Standard English”
Speicher and Bielanski.  Curriculum Inquiry. 2000 (147-169)

“Dilemmas of Identity: Oral and Written Literacies in the Making of a Basic Writing Student”
Cook-Gumperz, Anthropology and Education Quarterly 1993

“Dissin’ the Standard: Ebonics as Guerilla Warfare at Capital High”
Fordham, Anthropology and Education Quarterly 1999


These readings, taken all together explain why speakers of non-standard dialects might choose to no speak a standard dialect even though they might be able.
  • ·         First, what is “standard?” No one has defined  (can define?) it.  More than that, standard written English is another dialect in itself.
  • ·         Students of non-standard dialects have to learn not only the dialect, but a way to re-imagine themselves and how they can fit into a new discourse community.
  • ·         Often, many features of a spoken dialect (standard or not) do not have written counterparts, and so are impossible to express in written English (or at least SWE)
  • ·         The reasons for students to resist using SE are historical and based on power, oppression, community, and pride.


These articles also question the idea that using SE is necessary for success.  It depends on one’s definition of success, and  in what community one wants to be successful.  To be successful at Capital High, students had to come up with very complicated ways to navigate social and educational expectations

"Standard" English?


“Critical Thoughts on Teaching Standard English”
Speicher and Bielanski.  Curriculum Inquiry. 2000 (147-169)

Speicher and Bielansky argue against four assumptions that most people have about Standard English (SE).

1.       Spoken English equates to written English
2.       Spoken and written English are equally amenable to standardization.
3.       SE is the language of the workplace and essential for social mobility.
4.       SE is the language of the classroom.

This is a pedagogy piece which deals with theory more than pedagogical practice.  The audience is teachers or education professionals.  The authors’ main point is that spoken English and Written English are very different, despite the assumptions of many people, including teachers , education professionals, and even some language professionals. The authors want to make this point to raise awareness about this difference and to make some suggestions for further study, specifically the use of prototype theory to help define Standard English. Perhaps the most compelling idea presented in this piece is Standard Ideology, which is described at a set of attitudes about language that assumes that standard English is either better or more pragmatic than non-standard varieties of English; it is so powerful that even non-standard speakers believe in SI.

Below is my detailed outline of the article (more for my own use, but I thought I would include it.


1.       Spoken English equates to written English
a.       Written English has become a prescriptive code for spoken English.
b.      Much of the information passed in spoken English does not appear in written English (tone, pitch, gestures, facial expressions, context, etc)
c.       Are acquired differently
d.      Grammars are different
e.      SWE and SSE are different registers: Educators do not speak SWE—no one does!

2.       Spoken and Written English are equally amenable to standardization
a.       No one has (can?) define and specify the lexical, phonological and grammatical features of SE (spoken or written).
b.      People erroneously believe that there is a SE
c.       Scholars prefer the term SI—standard ideology
d.      Hegemonic:  assumptions about SE are widely accepted in popular perceptions about language diversity
                                                               i.      Prescriptivists are very successful at promoting SI—even those who speak stigmatized forms believe that others are better
e.      How do speakers recognize SE? Authors describe prototype theory as one way
                                                               i.      Some features may be essential, while others may be characteristic
                                                             ii.      Judgments may be based on combinations of features
                                                            iii.      This is disappointing, I was hoping for an analysis

3.       Standard English is the language of the workplace and essential to social mobility
a.       Even when scholars accept the premise that all dialects are equal, they pragmatically say that accepts the privileging of SSE
b.      Stigmatized form are associated with lower socioeconomic class with least political power
c.       SI helps explain the privileging of SSE
                                                               i.      Si privileges certain users and stigmatizes others
                                                             ii.      “large numbers of intelligent people condemn and resent language change, regarding alterations as due to unnecessary sloppiness, laziness and ignorance.” Aitchison 1991
                                                            iii.      Historical and unquestioned association between good English and good character
                                                           iv.      “Language is pure; people who use language are corrupt.”
1.       Thus it is the individual’s fault for failing to learn SSE, not the school’s
2.       Justifies the use of language testing that labels certain features as meriting remedition and tracks certain students into particular curricula
                                                             v.      Some scholars believe linguistic bias is a cover for racism
                                                           vi.      Linguistic and cultural gap between teachers and students
1.       Teachers can punish students for perceived “deviant” language
2.       Teachers can mistake a difference in dialect as a learning disability or lack of intelligence
                                                          vii.      Racial or gender discrimination are illegal; linguistic discrimination are a kind of institutionalized discrimination
                                                        viii.      Many people still believe that nonstandard dialects indicate laziness or stupidity


4.       Standard English is the language of the classroom
a.       This assumption has never been tested
b.      More common: debates on whether nonstandard dialects should be allowed in the classroom (e.g., the ebonics controversy)
c.       Teachers think that imposition of the standard might be demeaning to students
d.      Some scholars think that to deny a student their way of speaking is to alienate them
e.      Most people (not necessarily teachers) think SSE should be used in the classroom
f.        There  is no guarantee that teachers are using SSE
                                                               i.      No agreement on what SSE is
                                                             ii.      Authors again suggest prototype theory to help define it
g.       Teachers are good at teaching SI, not so good at teaching SSE




Dilemmas of Identity: Oral and Written Literacies in the Making of a Basic Writing Student
Cook-Gumperz, Anthropology and Education Quarterly 1993

This is a case study of an African American woman student returning to a basic skills program at a community college, and her experience with a tutor.  The author finds aspects of her experience that “challenge accepted notions of schooled literacy.” (336) This is a case study and pedagogical piece whose intended audience is teachers and education professionals. The author’s main point is that learning standard English takes more than just learning a new dialect.  It is a complicated process that include re-defining oneself and the way one thinks about education. I may be reading into it too much, but by the author’s tone it seemed that she was judging (negatively) the institution and the tutor for oppressing Wanda (the name of the case study subject) by forming her story (and so, her) into academic English.

My detailed outline follows.


1.       “The institutional motivation for school practice remains the promotion and selection of a specific kind of literate talent.” 336
2.       Students have to learn how to write and also how to rethink their relationship to the process of schooling.
3.       Minority students become viewed “re-entering” and underprepared
4.       Author argues that the cognitive processes necessary for a minority student to prepare an academic text are more complex than previously thought
a.       This complexity can be one of the reasons adult students “fail to learn”
b.      Demands a deep emotional commitment and involvement on the part of the language user
c.       Students achieve technical competence and the construction of a social self that is linked to one’s language
5.       Case Study: Wanda
a.       30 year old re-entry student who sees herself as someone who has been admitted to  a college class, and so has overcome an earlier history of school failure
b.      Has two issues
                                                               i.      Provide a coherent sequesnce of events that can be understood by a stranger
                                                             ii.      Do so with clear grammar and mechanics that can be written down
c.       Tells a story about her first job
                                                               i.      When telling the story verbally, she focuses on (a) how she got the job and (b) how her attitude changed when she got the job
                                                             ii.      Written product only quickly mentions the attitude change
                                                            iii.      Moves between “unmarked” style and an AAVE style
                                                           iv.      This creates a difficulty that most people don’t realize: many aspects of her verbal style have no counterparts in written English
                                                             v.      This is difficult to manage for even experienced, talented writers
                                                           vi.      Further complicated as a minority woman, as her audience will not necessarily empathize with her (Minh-ha 1989)
                                                          vii.      Through the writing and dealing with  the tutor, her personal voice is transformed into a public voice.  The author seems to think this is a bad thing.
1.       Order is strictly temporal (unlike when spoken)
2.       More nominalizations and more complex sentence variety
                                                        viii.      Author seems to think that Wanda was oppressed by the institution (and the tutor) since the text she produced had more features of academic writing, though it seemed to me that Wanda had no problem with it. She was an enthusiastic student who wanted to learn.

“But I hope this analysis,
by going beyond the surface of what she has written to look at what she
really intended to communicate, can begin to show how any description
of literacy, as it applies to the real literacy products of real adults, needs
to be expanded beyond what is traditionally seen as schooled literacy.” 353


Dissin’ the Standard: Ebonics as Guerilla Warfare at Capital High
Fordham, Anthropology and Education Quarterly 1999

This is a beautifully written paper that explores the reasons AAVE speaking high school kids do not to speak “Standard” English.  This is a study that has teachers and education professionals as its audience. The author’s main point is to explain why speakers of AAVE (specifically, at a high school in Washington D.C.) will refuse to speak “Standard English.” There are several reasons: The students do not want to buy into the perceived power structure that Standard English is a part of; they do not want to be seen as acting “too White,” which might indicate they are siding with oppressors.  “Standard” English is a stigmatized dialect in this community, to be used only in school, and even then, only in specific circumstances.  One way students resist oppression is to refuse to participate in certain aspects of their education (Kory: “I don’t do book reports.”) even though this will affect their educational opportunities.

Below is my detailed outline.  I wrote it for myself, but thought I would include it here.


1.       Ebonics as rhetorical resistance; crucial in the subversive war of Black identity maintenance
2.       SE helps define caste system
3.       SE viewed as an inappropriate speech form: socially stigmatized
4.       What is considered “standard” is a “contested site for self-definition, reistance, and accomodation.
5.       Students realize that speaking SE is crucial to their success
a.       So some “lease the standard, ” speaking it from 9 to 3
b.      Others resist completely
6.       Black students who speak SE might be seen as trying to be White, and may use that power to exploit
a.       Acting white is a metaphor for power relationships that address the historic exclusion of Black Americans
b.      Suggests identity deflection or impersonation
c.       Getting good grades can be “acting White;” this causes students a lot of conflict
7.       After slavery, “Language ..replaced slavery as the social mechanism that would ensure the continued exploitation of Black people.) (5)
8.       “Appearing but not to be” allows students to use SE in certain situations, but not give up their power or place in the community
a.       The worst is when a Capital student uses SE uncritically
9.       Students sometimes use avoidance to maintain Black intellectual integrity
a.       E.G., Korey: “I don’t do book reports” is a way of rebelling and showing loyalty
b.      Sadly, this affects their educational opportunities: “marks them for academic and social failure.”
“Resistance—as conformity—is the academically successful student’s weapon of choice in their efforts to maintain a Black identity and in fighting the ongoing linguistic war.” (10)

Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Applying SLIPs theory to our sample papers


Here is a Krauthammer cheat sheet:

Phonology: spelling and print code deviations
Morphology: inflectional deletions, inconsistencies, inventions
Syntax: sentence boundaries, double negatives, awkward constructions, mixed constructions, misplaced modifiers, etc
Semantics: wrong word, colloquialisms, low variety
Pragmatics: vagueness, lack of unity, coherence, organization

Pot Legal
Phonology
This problems
Morphology
Children’s
Syntax
Sentence boundaries are generally pretty good (one run on); lots of awkward phrasing: “jim grey but that does not mean that we are ready to give up yet.”
Semantics
Lots of colloquialisms
Pragmatics
Serious lack of unity!

Weird Friday
Phonology
Blank it
Morphology
I got dress
Syntax
Run ons
Semantics
“well, it all started out…” “we did hella things”
Pragmatics
Lack of focus; does not emphasize what is important

Spelling
Phonology
If a star; this year is my change
Morphology
My self, I going to
Syntax
I should just write and don’t stop in to all the ideas
Semantics
My spelling kills me (colloq)
Pragmatics
The content of the essay is unrelated to the title and thesis

Intro 1
Phonology
Realy,
Morphology
Sandra high school teacher, works well on groups, she need work
Syntax
But in personality is as a good student; run on
Semantics
Generally good
Pragmatics


Intro 2
Phonology
english, Geovann’ys, on organize
Morphology
Isn’t
Syntax
Always leaves (no subj);
Semantics
Stuff
Pragmatics
Generally good for the assignment

Intro 3
Phonology
Sometimes wonders off; studer
Morphology
Stayes on track
Syntax
Run on
Semantics
So who’s the luck professor? (Colloquial); lots of these
Pragmatics
Ok for this assignent

Monday, March 4, 2013

Moving from the informal to the academic



Prompt: Why do you think it's difficult for some students move from informal oral language to written academic language? 

I think it is difficult for some students to master written academic language just because people are generally unconscious about the way that they use language. I don’t mean to say that this is their fault; what I mean to say is that language is such an ingrained aspect of a person’s personality that most people don’t notice much about it.
My wife is an example of this.  She is Japanese, and she came to the US when she was 10, so she acquired both Japanese and English naturally.  I tried studying Japanese a few years ago, and would ask her basic grammar questions, and she would have no idea what I was talking about. She had never thought about it, and was not really interested in thinking about it on the day that I asked her.  I am an analytical language learner, so it was frustrating to me sometimes, but it was clear to me that we learned language in different ways.
Today she is a successful manager in a large organization, and she has to write long, complicated documents in a specific genre. It was hard for her at first, but her boss was patient with her small (ear-learner) mistakes. She had to find a way to pull back a little and get some objectivity about her language and the way she was expected to write. Once she was able to do that, she was able to teach herself to write very well in the formal genre used in business.
This is exactly how I hope to help students acquire what is essentially a different dialect of English. I hope I can bring some new perspective to the way they look at their language, so that they can understand language in a new way, and use that understanding to shift into formal written English when necessary.

“Mastering Academic Discourse”


I never paid much attention to “academic discourse.” From what I remember of the freshman comp class that I took at the junior college back so many years ago, I didn’t seem like I really had a problem with academic language. At that time I was focused much more on choosing good topics and writing my ideas clearly. I do remember talking to the instructor after class one day when he was saying that some students in the class were having trouble with writing in an academic style (I don’t remember how he described it at the time), so I was aware that some people had difficulties with it.  I suppose I was one of the lucky lower-middle class white kids whose dialect was fairly similar to that of academic English.
Then again, I should mention that I read like crazy all through my junior high, high school, and community college years.  I’m sure that had an effect on my writing at that age.
It was not until I went to grad school that I was really aware of academic writing. I was studying linguistics, and had to slog through papers that were (sometimes) badly written by brilliant, brilliant people.  When I got feedback from my professors about my first major assignment, one of the comments I got was that my writing was good and easy to follow.
My biggest challenge with respect to academic writing is the anxiety that it causes me.  It seems that I have to spend some time before I start writing just stressing out about it, staring at a blank page and freaking out about why I am not writing.  The amount of time that I spend seems to be proportional to the amount that I have to write.  The longest thing that I have written in a long time was the final paper for English 700—it was about 14 pages long, and I spent two full days (after doing research and taking notes, even writing outlines) just pulling my hair out trying to find a way to get started. Some of the literature we read last semester was actually helpful to me in the end. I figured out a way to lower the stakes of each imperfect word that I wrote, just so that I could start writing some words down. After a couple of pages, my anxiety had reduced to  a point that I could write and even find some enjoyment in it. That was a nice feeling of accomplishment, the feeling that I had overcome my own anxiety and perfectionism for a long enough moment to be able to produce something.